When you are low
A gentle critique hits like a punch
You question your price tag
No reason to deny your pointless trip
Hundreds of people shuffle by your prison
The lives of strangers glow in your perception
You stay distant from nearby comforts
This absence of her started your slide
An invisible family ignores your words
When did your GPS get you this lost?
But, your walk must continue
It is only in your distance that you can survive
A walk forward out of your low
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September Writing prompts -The Absence of Her-Day 21/31
Good one!
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